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EL LOCO DIABLO · 08-28-2009, 09:15 PM

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Originally Posted by abhijeet080808

Ok..good till now.. pls continue..

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Originally Posted by TnT

There's more? :P

Who is THAT guy?? (mr cool guy)

Nice one til now.. took me time to piece stuff together though

Total insult

, the story has ended with the previous part, was i being too ambiguous??

abhijeet080808 · 08-28-2009, 10:46 PM

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Originally Posted by EL LOCO DIABLO

Total insult

, the story has ended with the previous part, was i being too ambiguous??

Sorry about that. I thought the last part was still to come. I mean you haven't told us who the biker was! And it was a bit ambiguous though!

neon · 12-01-2009, 01:47 PM

liked the first part ...

... Reading the seconds part was getting interesting & then ...

i missed something here..

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And suddenly as soon as my eye-lids touched I had a sort of premonition, as though I sucked into a big tube of a giant vacuum cleaner, and then ...?... as I opened my eyes I was standing in some sort of a desolate highway, pitch black with almost no light except for a faint glow of a few stars overhead.

I dunno i lost the feel of the story, i dunno know were were you heading, & i lost my mind off ur story now, i dont feel like reading ... until if you can clarify

JoHn SaMuEl · 03-12-2010, 04:05 PM

It's very deep and involving.I have to admit it's confusing when you tell your illusion when you were riding on the bullet .But i liked it nonetheless.

P.S : you have loads of memory to remember all the details.

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JoHn SaMuEl GODSPEED !! Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: the city of destiny, vizag Posts: 73	My opinion It's very deep and involving.I have to admit it's confusing when you tell your illusion when you were riding on the bullet .But i liked it nonetheless. P.S : you have loads of memory to remember all the details. __________________ Clear left, clear right, vroom !!

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